Writing a Believable Romance: A Guide for Fanfic Authors
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romance is much more than a girl meets boy story where the characters fall
in love and live happily ever after in the castle of their dreams. It begins
with the creation of full-bodied characters that jump from the page, grab
the readers by the heart and pull them into the story. This
becomes even more tricky when writing a Beatles-related romantic adventure.
Just writing your favorite Beatle’s name on the page and making him the
hero is not enough. You’re going to have to flesh him out and turn him
into a living, breathing man the reader can relate to. A
good way to begin this process is by watching as many videos and interviews
as you can. This way you become attuned to your hero’s body language,
verbal accent, and basic temperament. Now, for the emotional flavor that
will bring your hero full circle, study your boyfriend, brother or husband.
Watch his moods and see how he handles them. Is he arrogant and distant
sometimes? What is he like when he’s tender? By weaving these kinds of
details into your Beatle hero, you create a full-bodied man any reader can
fall in love with. The
same concept applies with the creation of a heroine. She should be someone
the reader can find believable as the romantic interest of your Beatle hero.
She should not be flat or whiny, fainting at every turn. She should
be sure of herself and her goals. To obtain the proper effect, think about
yourself and how you deal with situations. Study your mother or girlfriend.
What qualities do they posses that you admire? Don’t be afraid to add some
negative emotions to your heroine either. Women run in cycles, sometimes
irritable, crying for no reason and then kind and loving. Once again, by
weaving these foibles together, you create a heroine
readers will admire and follow into the tale to experience the
romantic adventure. Next
you will want to consider what the goals, motivation and conflicts
confronting your characters are. For instance in the Shelly
Series, Paul and Shelly’s main goal as a couple is to make their
marriage work. Shelly’s personal goal is her consulting business. Paul’s
personal goal is to finally accept the loss of Linda and move on. The
motivation for this is their deep love and mutual respect for each other. Now
we come to the conflict. A story without conflict is dry and lifeless.
Nobody enjoys a life filled with conflict, but without it, a story fails.
Once again, in the Shelly Series,
there are many conflicts at work to keep Shelly and Paul apart. The main one
for Shelly is learning to accept Paul for what and who he really is.
Meanwhile, Paul has made a promise he cannot keep. He spends the first
portion of the series trying to protect Shelly from the media and what the
news of their marriage would mean. Then the secret begins to unravel and the
truth is found out. By figuring out the goal, motivation, and conflict of
your characters you create a story that captivates the reader. Romance Categories
There
are several categories in the genre of Romance: Sweet, Sweet to Hot, and
Hot. A
good example of a Sweet romance is the kick off to the Shelly Series: Stranger
In The Penthouse. Shelly and Paul’s relationship slowly grows and
the story ends with a hug and a kiss, nothing more. Next
is Sweet to Hot. The hero and heroine will meet, work at their relationship
and only consummate it after marriage. For some reason not many romantic
Beatle stores fall into this category. The closest example in this genre is
Cheryl Mortensen’s Young
Love, First Love. It is a tender, bittersweet story about a young
girl and young Ringo experiencing love for the first time. Finally
we come to the third category: Hot. This type of story brings the main hero
and heroine together quickly, and usually by the second chapter they are
having sexual relations. A very fine and well-written example of this is A
Dark
and Snowy Nite by Bonnie
Mullen. Her trilogy takes Paul and Kate McGuire from star-crossed lovers
through a battle to preserve their love while they overcome numerous
obstacles that would destroy most relationships. A
more recent addition to the Hot category is Erotica. Not only has this been
introduced in the mainstream Romance industry, but it has also found its way
into Beatles-related fiction. These stories are intended for the mature
audience, as the subject matter is adult and the language and descriptions
are extremely graphic. Sandy Johnson handles this newest genre well in her
time travel epic, Like
Dreamers Do. Her main
characters are John and Paul, and her heroine is Amanda Bailey. Each travels
back in time from the present to the early 1960’s. Paul is trying to
overcome his devastation from the untimely loss of Linda, while Bailey is
trying to find her way after the death of her husband, Jack. John is their
unexpected ghostly guide who helps Bailey and Paul find new and fulfilling
love. When
creating your romantic adventures, try and keep in mind the steps and
techniques discussed above. Decide which category the tale falls into, plot
your story out, and remember to build those believable characters. You’ll
have your readers begging for more! |
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Mary Spollen has been pursuing a career as
a writer for the past six years. |
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